Thursday, 16 February 2012

A Big Trip

In the holidays I went to Ratahi for one night and then up to Auckland for a week or two then back to Ratahi to see my pony Oscar. He is a chestnut rome which is orange with white flakes around his rump. He needs his winter coat brushed off. He has got three little socks and one back one is long which is hard to keep clean. When we first saw him he nickered. I ran like a cheater to say hi and give him some grass. Then went to see my little cousin Charlie’s pony Elly. Elly is fat with a white tail and mane.

By Bella


10 comments:

  1. Great story Bella. Another feature that stands out on Oscar is the big white stripe on his face which is called a blaze.

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  2. I know Oscar was very pleased to see you again Bella. You are writing some great stories.Did you know that Ellie's colour is called a silver dapple!

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  3. Wow, Bella! This is such a great piece of writing! I love your use of simile! You are so clever! Keep up the awesome work - I can't wait to read more as the year progresses!
    Love,
    Ginny, Saul and Annie x

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  4. Hi Bella

    Don't you look so good sitting up there on Oscar! I bet he was thrilled to see you again. Love his haircut - er - mane cut!! :)
    Love
    Janna

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  5. Hi Bella,

    What a great story! He is a very handsome horse, you obviously take good care of him. Keep up the great writing, we can't wait to read your next story.
    Love
    U Dave, A Carla and the cousins!

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  6. I bet Oscar was happy to see you as well Bella!
    Love Aunty Briar

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  7. Hi Bella, it was so nice to see Oscar's photo - I have heard so much about him. I loved your description of him too - you used some great descriptive words - well done!

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  8. You look very comfortable on a horse. Lucky Oscar having you to look after him. You are lucky so many people have given you more ideas about what you could add to your writing. I could tell from your writing that you were excited to see him.

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  9. Hey Bella,

    I like your story. I read it to Charlie and she liked it too. She liked having Oscar to stay. (So did Ellie!)
    Keep up the good writing.

    Aunty Marni x

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  10. Hi bella, your hores looks sssssssssoooooooooooo cool.You must love your hores because I do. I hope you dont have to pick up its do do. Aroha

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