This is Jordan's first draft of his autobiography. Can you give him any feedback and feed forward on how he could make it even better?
I was born in 2003 and my birthday is on April 11th.I was born in Palmerston North. Before I started school i had chicken pox when i was little and i had them all over my body. When I was three I went to Australia and i went on a roller coaster and every time I got off it I was crying and I always wanted to go back on it. When I was little I cut my head open a little bit because when my brother was giving me a piggy back I fell off and cut my head open and they had to glue my head back together.