Thursday, 21 June 2012

Cross Country

Check out Bella's final copy of her cross country writing.  She was learning to use descriptions so the audience got a picture in their heads.


  1. Bella's Mum21 June 2012 at 11:12

    Well done Bella. I really like how you have used paragraphs in your final version. I got a great picture in my head of how you felt at the cross country.

  2. Cool story Bella it is so awesome =]