Thursday, 21 June 2012

Cross Country

Check out Bella's final copy of her cross country writing.  She was learning to use descriptions so the audience got a picture in their heads.


2 comments:

  1. Well done Bella. I really like how you have used paragraphs in your final version. I got a great picture in my head of how you felt at the cross country.

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  2. Cool story Bella it is so awesome =]

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